"How do you think your behavior has been this year?" Miss Campbell asked.
"I think I have behaved well and have stayed on track for most of the year."
"I do agree that you have stayed on track and have got your work done even though you like to talk a bit in class." " What's something you think you need to work on?"
"I think I need to get to class on time instead of being 5 minutes late and definitely I can always work on getting my maths scores up."
"Do you know what your levels are?"
"Yes I got a 4A in maths, 5B in reading and 5B in writing."
"Ok that is good that you are at and above the standerd for everything."
Nice job Milly! At one stage you had the same person talking and in the same sentence but you separated them with speech marks it's kinda confusing. Otherwise you were honest and wrote the dialogue good.
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