I am a Year 8 student at Tauranga Intermediate School in New Zealand. I am in Rm42 and my teacher is Miss Campbell.
You were a bit off in areas and I don't think that you got the whole idea, also there were a few grammar problems like when you wrote got instead of gets. But other than that the page was really nicely laid out and you had some good pictures to.
Fairly good. You didn't cover the commercial aspects. Work on extending your research next week.
You were a bit off in areas and I don't think that you got the whole idea, also there were a few grammar problems like when you wrote got instead of gets. But other than that the page was really nicely laid out and you had some good pictures to.
ReplyDeleteFairly good. You didn't cover the commercial aspects. Work on extending your research next week.
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